Thursday 2 August 2012

The Rockets Super Exciting Sentences

We have been learning to make our stories more powerful by adding adjectives and verbs. We chose our best sentences to publish. Thanks to Room 1 at Brightwater School for the idea. 
The racing Room 4 rockets blast off into big learning. Taylor
The fast Springston Rockets are blasting into writing.  Kelsey
The scratchy cat bites.  Lily
The golden mermaid flapped its tail. Aria
A big caterpillar chomps. Brigid
The fast rockets are blasting off very fast. Sjaak
The happy mermaid splashes. Zoe
The blue, slippery dolphin dives up and down.  Kiera
The amazing skiers ski down the hill very fast. Cameron
The big cat is riding my horse. Jack
The super boomerang zoomed back. Jed
The enormous dog munches. Todd
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  1. Madmacnz6 August 2012 at 20:20

    I love your interesting adjectives and verbs. They help me paint a clear picture in my mind, like a movie.

    Carol

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